Monday, 6 August 2018

Toby The Elephant -By Matthew G.

Learning Intention-We are learning to write a narrative story.            Success Criteria-I am successful when I can write an narrative story using capital letters and full stop correctly.                                                                 Toby The Elephant                                                                                                                                           
Long ago there was an elephant name Toby. He loved eating banana's and uprooting trees.One day he found some banana's and because didn't ate lunch he got a bunch.Suddenly he found himself stuck in a net.Then hunters came and put him in a cage and brought him to the Colosseum to fight gladiators.Toby didn't want to fight but the guard's made him fight by poking him with spears.                                                         
A  boy in the crowd felt sorry for Toby. So one night he unlocked Toby's cage and Toby went back to the forest and lived happily ever after with his family.                                                                                               

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