Thursday, 30 March 2017

The day saved Emily by Asinate


L-I -W.A.L.T-  write a recount.
Success Criteria- I  know I can do this when I write my story in order and use capital letters and  full stops  correctly.

                   The Day I saved Emily
Image result for fishing Last Thursday down by the river, I  was fishing all  by myself  when there was a loud scream.  A little girl was in the water.  She was shouting for help. I dashed in  and pulled her  out. I had my clothes on and I was shivering ...After  that Emily's  mum said, "Thank you so much for saving Emily".

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